Friday 30 October 2015

100 WC Showcase Week 6

Lola wrote a 100 Word Challenge entry that needed to include 'it felt like'. Her work was 'Showcased' on the 100 Word challenge website

Below is a copy of her writing that was originally posted here.

"I am at my friends sleepover party, we are having a mid-night feast at the minet, we have stayed awake all night so far. In the morning we both went down and had egg and bacon with some fresh orange juce to drink. We both went into town and went in the milkshake shop and got a milkshake. I got a chocolate milkshake and my friend had a strawberry milkshake.I took a sip and it felt like I was eating ice because it was so cold. We both walked back home together with are milkshakes. It was the best sleepover ever."


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