Below is a copy of her writing that was originally posted here.
Welcome to the Year Five website. On this website, we will be sharing examples of our children's work. This page is a workshop containing examples of learning in action. The work will not be the children's 'final draft’.
Sunday 13 December 2015
100 WC Showcase Week 12
Charlotte wrote a 100 Word Challenge entry that needed to include 'my head really ached'. Her work was 'Showcased' on the 100 Word challenge website.
Aarrgghh! 3:10 already! Oh, why, why did time have to pass so fast? Only
10 minutes of the school day left, but why should I be happy? Two
sentences in 1 hour, 34 minutes would surely equal detention? I hope
not. My mind was blank and my head really ached, so I couldn't think of
anything. I stuck my head over my shoulder and peeked at Seamus' work.
Over 10 lines already! I looked at my own work, frustrated by the glory
and pride of everyone else's work. I suddenly looked at my watch. Uh
oh!"DETENTION!"
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